Monday, 29 May 2017

Clothing writing

I get driven to a luminous destination where the ground is creamy and playful. 

As the buttercup sun beams down on the glistening surface I get put on and as I jump in aqua blue liquid surrounds me. I look down and see what's underneath me, and it's like a paradise. 

My owner loves splashing around with me so we play until the sun goes down. I get out and they wrap a snuggly warm fabric around me. They peel me off and I get put in a bag, taken home and washed for another day to come. 

I have used wow words such as luminous,beams and described things in my story for example… the buttercup sun. 

My next step is to use my language features.

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